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Making Sentances Shorter

I’ve been trying to improve my writing skills, so I’ve been reading some language proficiency manuals.  Everyting I’m learning is the opposite of business which is about getting the message out, simple and quick! (Forget Grammer)

So how could I possibly make this sentence any shorter than it is?

How could I make this sentence any shorter?

Could I make this sentence shorter?

Could I make this shorter?

This is shorter still.

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July 19, 2009 - Posted by | Marketing

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